Sunday, February 26, 2017

Benefits Short

NEEDS more SHOW me don't tell me and



AT END:  Closeup of AMAL signing ACCEPTANCE>

ENTRANCES and EXITS movement.

1) COMPANY , Boss and Interviewee AMAL  FINE. Company Name Benefits folder:
Monteverdi And  Family Investment Association (ADVISORS?)

Mention money laundering through
!!!!Charter Schools and Private Prisons.

1A) Gal comes in earlier, boss asks for something to drink.
SHOW something to drink. Vodka looks like water.
AMAL: I don't Alcohol.
BOSS: You've been drinking vodka, Smooth right?
AMAL: Coughs.

Re; Collections
SHOW a finger.
Finger thing: be more cryptic,
She already did it.
"He can still drive, use a phone,
He can still have children"

Boss asks Gal to bring AMAL for
ORIENTATION.
Boss can EXIT during this.

SHOW a little hint of dance. Hilde did GREAT in Being there "I Like to watch" scene.
This is similar hint

2nd Bit: Dance. Hilde wore skinny strap gown for BEING THERE.
You wanna see me dance sometime?
AMAL's eyes get big.
use term Friends with
BENEFITS . AMAL smiles
end




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